My phone is an object that travels wherever I go. It’s my private thing that no one is allowed to touch. I am a bank guard and its my money . My phone is someones private property, no trespassing, the sign is there, but you can not see it, it is something that should infer and know is enforced. One day in a very drama filled and depressing school I got my phone taken, I was in that Mr. Buckmasters class minding my own business and my pocket started buzzing, I thought it was a toothbrush or something, but then I check and it was a text. Being me I fell for it and opened the text to see who it was and what it said, but I looked at the text a little too long before.. BAM it was snatched out of my hand! I was in shock I didn’t know what to do... I was mad and didn’t want to give it to him at first, but he said he would write me up for insubordination! I took my phone and took the sim card and battery out of it because its my phone and I don't want people going through my privacy.
David: i liked the sentence where you were talking about how your phone goes everywhere you go and no one touches it because thats how i feel about my phone. i liked the sentence i am a bank gaurd and my phone is my money. its cool. reading you vignettes makes me sad because i broke my phone and i miss it. -Tate H
ReplyDeleteDavid: I really liked the line you used, I am the bank guard and it is my money. I liked your metaphor, I thought it was really good and it was unique. I like how you used the word BAM in your story. Your vignette made me feel like i'm not as private as your are with your phone but I can relate. -Wade
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